Completed Puck 1.5

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  1. Mv

    Mv Well-Known Member Administrator

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    Puck was a very promising concept that was misrepresented and did not do that well. We are fixing some of its bugs and adding more to it so we can resubmit it either as part of our tournament deals or if it turns out well enough it can go as part of the charity as well.

    Here is what it was before:
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    @Krab is adding some particles to it, as particles are acceptable as long as they ambent and minimal as seen on the currently released sets.
     
  2. Reza

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    [​IMG]

    Particles made by @Krab

    Well the position of the particles are fine, but not sure if orange glow is fitting or even enough.
    I think you could take a look at puck's default ambient particles (the falling sparkles) and also at this item: http://dota2.gamepedia.com/Merry_Wanderer's_Brush
    The way the glow on tail works is really nice, it changes tone and brightness.
    Also the ambient effect is very nice, perhaps you can try to see if you can take that trail effect and either add it to the glow or make it an upward flow of sparkles, similar to this: http://dota2.gamepedia.com/Mania's_Mask (the eyes)but of course not that solid.
    Lastly I think the 3 items need different effects, repeating them is not a good idea in my opinion :)
     
  3. Krab

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  4. Reza

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    I really like the tail, nice
    maybe you could reduce the glow of tail a bit so that the model is more visible, not sure
    Anyways, this is exactly what I meant. good job
     
  5. Krab

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    asd.gif
    I added sparks on wings.
     
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  6. Reza

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    nice, could I get a side view as well?
    Also I think you could add some sort of glow (or something else that you think can fit) to the wing balls as well, cause now they are very plain.
    it's turning to be very nice man :)

    Also it would be nice if u try some yellow glow with little brightness on the wing tips as well (all 8 of them) so we can see how they look.
     
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  7. Krab

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    Right way??
    puck_wing_pr.gif
    P.S.
    gif has bad colors
    i dont know why
     
  8. Reza

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    it's very nice but I'm afraid that it's concealing the model itself. like it's too much the model is not seen much. But the colors and the elements are fitting very well.
     
  9. Mv

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    Ok, here are my issues.

    Head: It should just be a simple glow, no sparks.

    Wings: I do not like this trail or spark. I suggest. Remove all. and make only On glow on the pink ball, and then like Doom, you put one small glow on top tip of the wings. Like this:
    http://dota2.gamepedia.com/Wings_of_Vashundol
    but not fire! just simple glow. and no trail!

    Tail: Tail is good, but only add one orange ball - very small in the middle. so it can be contrast of color.
     
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  11. Reza

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    nice, the trail is much nicer.
    couple of things:
    1. I can't really understand where the trail comes from,
    2.I wish something could have been done to the wing balls, even if it's very small. Now since the other parts are glowing, the wing balls look very pale.
     
  12. Krab

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    what i need fix for now??
     
  13. Reza

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    Well mainly see if you can do something with the wing balls.
     
  14. Reza

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    so we will have 2 wing styles:
    1. the wing balls are model
    2. the wing balls are particle
    any comments?
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    I think this is it:
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    0o very nice!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! omg
     

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